fuck you
you sorry piece of shit
I'm not gonna fucking talk to you again
you stupid little whore bag full of lice
why cant you understand it
I DON'T LIKE YOU
in fact
I FUCKING WELL HATE YOU!!!
maybe if you listened once in your god forsaken life
you would see that the world doesn't revolve around you
so don't come near me again
don't look at my photos
don't think about ME!!!
Coz I'm over you finally
your a gold digger little dole bludger
FUCK YOU!!!!!!
FUCK YOU FUCK YOU FUCK YOU
FUCK YOU FOR EVER
just, forget me and someday I'll forget the feeling of being rejected
Author notes
a few months ago my mother kicked me out of home, and i had to move states and schools, friends everything. i guess its finally starting to sink in and the anger that came with it.
normally i dont swear unless im pissed off,
well. just randomly writting in a minute because i needed to get the feelings out of my system.
ps) according to my biological mother we're still friends and everything, she doesnt care that i dont want to talk to her and will txt and email me, and im also apparently still living in her house.
Claire-Anne
Please tell me what you think
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what can i say, this is exactly what im talking about so in your face kick ass poetry, well played love it
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Excellent
I LOVE THIS RAW PASSIONATE ANGER OF A VENT POEM YOU WROTE HERE!!!!! okay caps off now that I got done yelling it LOL! Most ingenius yet very well penned poem for a vent I have read in quite some time. I really admire how you just let yourself go and the feelings just flow through out,. it sucks ass your mother did that but oh well. Glad you feel better! love ya sis and take care!
Bro 
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I can relate to this a bit, Raven. When I was going through my divorce, I had to stay with my Mom until I could find my own place. My brother talked her into throwing me out and I was forced to live in the first place I found. A slum basically. only until recently did my mother think I was still a part of the family. Its been years since I have spoken to anyone of my brothers and sisters. As far as i'm concerned, I'm an orphan with no relatives. Powerful stuff.
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You did an excellent job on this one... not only did you express your anger so well, but you did it in a poetic way... you write really good poems!
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dont say ur sorry. i dont need that, this is not me looking for ppl to be sorry for me. this is just me ranting and raving and getting everything out.
i dont want to hace people sorry for me
Claire-Anne -
I love you.
Just so you know.
You're the bestest girly here on AP in my books and I hate to see you upset.
But things will work out.
I promise.
SLAM (NOT putsabandaidon dammit!)
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Oh I am so sorry about yur situation
I am glad you have written this though.
Sounds like you have every right to be angry with your mother. She sounds very selfish.
Take care please!
Gaylene
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A bit ticked are we? With good reason it seems. I, too, am sorry for what happened. Of all people one should be close to it should be mom and visa versa. Keep feltering through the emotions....let it out as it comes. I wish you all the best.
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nice write hun
sorry it happend
hope ur ok
love you
<3 keep writing your feelings
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