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Thoughts Let Off The Leash (collection 3 of ? )

Drunk/pill popper
[hide from reality]
So gone have the time
Can figure out what i feel

Free therapist
[everyone first]
Tell me your problems
My problems mean nothing

I feel abandoned
So.so alone
But its not really true
Dont devote your life to me

My mom is there
But so.so not
I dont know what to say
Except where are you?

Lost as far as i know
Running from sobriety
Just to stay sane
And lost my path
Along the way

Dont know who I am
Cant find out
I think i know
but no.no.not really

Music, my soul
The only thing that expresses
What i think
Is truly the.one&&.only
M.E.!

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la.la.la you get the piont

Dunno, been drinkin, a..g.a.i.n

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  • Dwindle
    June 18, 2007

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    i enjoyed this. i can relate to Running from soberity. I getting closer to catching it. it take time to figure out who you really are. even harder when your are chasing the pain away.


  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    May 23, 2007
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    LOL Nice part 3

    Lmao nice part 3 here. I am laughin becaus eof whatcha wrote in the big black lettering. any ways very well done and written quite nicely for a part 3. you know you're not half bad of a poet even when you are in a state of drunkenness. any ways good work all round and keep ot up


  • ConvenientExcuses
    May 22, 2007

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    "Music, my soul
    The only thing that expresses
    What i think
    Is truly the.one&&.only
    M.E.!"

    this is my favorite part. music is very powerful.

    I love the idea of this collection of poems. keep writing!

    -Jessica


  • Amber Lee
    May 22, 2007
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    Great write!