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why have
you left this home
your faithful seeds planted
within distant neighbors gardens
tilled soils
~*~
Author notes
A
*Cinquain*
Syllable count:
2-4-6-8-2
A contest entry
- Succinct Poetry (15 words or less) by Malabu.
450 points, ended June 10, 2007, 32 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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this is beautiful.
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very nicely penned . . liked "your lonely seeds" and "summer gardens" . .
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Beautiful cinquain
cant imagine anything less.....such is beauty to an imaginative mind....settling softly in refrain. spoken like a true poet. Certainly, I cannot ignor the thoughts this brings.
Thank you for entering this beautiful cinquain
Mal
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Mal ~
Thanks so much for the opportunity to enter this Great Contest by you ~
I so look forward to your reviews ~
Have a Great day ~
Bear ~
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Very deep and emotive write, Brother Bear! Truly reaches out and touches a place deep within one's heart
Well done!
I wish you all the best in the contest -
beautiful... so much
said within those 15 words...
fabulous!
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Ellipsist ~
You're very kind my Dear ~
I believe I know your name from somewhere ~
Do you know Soldier....the Hottie?
Bear ~
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Wow!!
I am not familiar with this type of poetry and I think I need to find my Head
Wow! Powerful from what I have read~
and You did in form~
Form King
From the message- I will base on that since I cannot on the type...Loved it!!
Grabs at the Heartstrings!
Best wishes to You in the contest
Many blessings too
and much love~ Sissy Desire~*~
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this does make a person think... short and full of thought worthiness.. good luck in the contest...
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My dearest Uncle,
This was posted 6 hrs. ago, how is it I got first comment? hehehe. What a great thought filled piece! and there you go again with formed poetry I will never be able to keep up with all of them. LOL.
Best of luck in this contest!
Love ya
Nyetta
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