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Beautiful Souls

Tears flow down from beautiful eyes,
And tiny hands wipe those tears away.
These little bodies, bruised,
And their little spirits, broken.

They cannot say anything.
Or they will be hurt even more.
Why do adults do this to children?
Were they hurt the same way?

These gentle bodies have been injured,
Physically, emotionally, and mentally.
Why can't this abuse be stopped?
These children can't live this way.

Child abuse is a serious issue.
It can be prevented, and it can be stopped.
If only the adults who do this would know,
How much they're hurting beautiful souls.

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This is a serious issue and I am so happy that there's a contest where I can actually write about something I'm going into a field of doing. I am planning on being a social worker, because I love children. Please leave a comment. It would be really appreciated!

~ I.t.

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  • xXGoddessofPainXx
    May 22, 2007
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    Wow this is really what i was looking for.. It is so beautifully put and everything is wel written


  • Hetha gold member
    May 22, 2007

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    Excellent job! It raises awareness, as well as flowing nicely with words that are simple to understand. Child abuse is widespread and common. Almost epidemic. I should know the child end of it, for I too am a survivor. Good luck in the field you've chosen. May you bless and help every soul you touch, and help them heal from the traumatic effects, that never seem to go away. Remind them, "Never again!" No one should have to put up with it! Good luck in the contest!