Walked along a path
Not knowing where to go,
But the mind is set
To keep on walking
Until you find your way,
And your way will soon be led
To an angel.
Cross from the distance
There was this one guy,
Not too rich, and not too poor.
He was a good looker,
But his eyes were something.
Deep blue eyes that say so much,
But not everyone understood him.
The eyes can sparkle so nicely,
And so sweetly that your heart
Just skips a beat.
For when he speaks,
And having a smile on his face;
You'll feel warmth inside your heart.
For all the times you've been hurt,
And crying with sorrow.
He's there to take them all away,
And bring joy & passion in ones life.
For I appericate his heart,
And him being there.
Author notes
I hope everyone would like this piece, and if the grammar is wrong or whatever, I'm sorry.
Why I picked this piece is because someone has been awesome to me from Oct. until now. And he always writes me something like poetry or what not, so I thought I would write something for him.
Good Luck on the contest!!
Option #4-4
A contest entry
- **Blue Eyes and Secret Smiles by madgirlslovesong.
525 points, ended May 29, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
You can tell me what you think of my poem, but that's your choice!
Comments
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Well I....
I enjoyed this poem. It had a real feel to it. Like thoughts of actually meeting someone while walking down the street.
...And yes I'm checking out th poetic powers of my invited match- up. Alls fare in love and war right?
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Well!
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Well!
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I really liked this piece it's wonderful!
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