Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Such A Shame That It Was Only A Dream;

The Auditorium Was Cool and Silent.

Only One Bright Light Shone Out Onto The Stage.

It Shone Onto The Boy.

10,000 Eyes Were Fixed Upon Him.

Waiting In Anticipation.

 

The Boy Stood There Casually.

His Shaggy Black Hair Covering The Rim Of His Glasses.

He Wore A Black Band Tee, Ripped Jeans, And Dirty Vans.

His Hand Was Wrapped Around The Microphone.

Waiting.

 

Soon,

The Music Started To Flow Out Of The Speakers.

As He Slowly Started To Serenade The Audience Of 10,000 Eyes.

He Told His Story;

Filled With Sorrow, Regret, Passion, And Hope.

 

He Poured His Heart Out With Every Word He Spoke.

Every Single Word Hitting The Audience.

Making Them Feel All That He Had Been Through.

Everyone Felt His Sorrow.

Everyone Felt His Regret.

Everyone Felt His Passion.

Everyone Felt His Hope.

 

As He Held Out The Last Note,

He Released His Tight Grasp On The Microphone,

And Stepped Back Slightly.

10,000 Eyes Were Still Fixed Upon Him.

 

But As He Walked Off The Stage.

10,000 Hands Were Clapping For Him.

He Smirked;

For He Knew He Had Spread His Message To Every Soul In That Audience.

 

" Burn This In My Eyes,

Until I Can See Your Outline.

Carve This Onto Your Lips,

'Til You See My Blood Drip.

If You Should Ever Have To Walk That Line Alone,

Know That I Will Be Right There Beside You.

For I Walk That Line Every Single Day.

The Line That Leads Me To Life.

The Line That Leads Me To Who I Am. "

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    July 17, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    ScreamingForAirxx,

    Interesting write =] Every word starting with a capital kind of hurt my eyes but this is well written.

    I sense there’s something deeper in the words then first appearances; Excellent

    Stay safe
    ~Amanda


  • Bruised.Roses
    June 28, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    hey this was really well written....I loved the flow and it was just beautiful thanks for posting it in my reading list
    xoxox
    Tash


  • Morbidly Gorgeous
    June 21, 2007
    Edit | Reply
    This Is Beautiful Baby.


  • love tank x
    May 28, 2007
    Edit | Reply
    Dannniel!
    Wow I think you're writing is getting EVEN BETTER.
    This is awesome!!

    "The Auditorium Was Cool and Silent.
    Only One Bright Light Shone Out Onto The Stage.
    It Shone Onto The Boy.
    10,000 Eyes Were Fixed Upon Him.
    Waiting In Anticipation."

    I bet that dream will come true one day
    Good job <333