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Silent Bliss

my back to your front
your arms around me
your hands resting contently on my stomach
[so glad it's only the two of us]
my hands atop of your own
we're silent, for once
as we stand and listen
in the middle of everyone
in the middle of everything
verbal usage contained to nothing
because there's nothing to be said
we have all that we need
in each other's arms.

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  • lingonberries
    May 22, 2007
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    I like this, it's sweet, and it makes me feel happy. I can recognize myself in this, when this feeling arrives, then there is happy times. I really like how you use the words here, you describe it so smooth and gentle. It is really good, and grabbed my attention. Keep up the good work!


    • Cokaine
      May 22, 2007
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      Thank you so much.

      Smooth and gentle, I like that. XD