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~Respiration~

I never thought I'd find, but my lungs are Full
Because my air has finally found me Now
For the 1st time, I'm truly breathlessly in Love
With this lady, who has saved my life Somehow

With every breath I take, and every Exhale
She has shown me my light, to Redemption
For I truly know now, she's not only my Soul's Mate
But she is my Life's sustenance, and my each and every...

Respiration!...

Holla @ Ja Boi
TX Leonard

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  • D.H.C.4Life silver member
    July 18, 2007
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    A true love found, a soul mate caressed, at first love kiss, you think you're in bliss. You may as well miss but who am I to argue with love? Love is a strange and wonder feeling, or is it an action word? A verb? Maybe. Who knows. I don't! Nice write dear one. Keep writing and soon you will find that all you left behind will come to find you at last!

    . Rewarded 6


  • Midnight Dreamer Greeters member
    July 16, 2007

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    Now I can relate to this poem very well. I too feel this way about my love. She is the one thing that keeps me alive. She is my lifes blood and breath. I love this poem. Bookmarked for sure.

    Love be the message,
    Peace be the journey.

    Justin

  • PrabhuDayal Khattar gold member
    July 16, 2007

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    For I truly know now she's not only my Soul's Mate
    But she is my Life's sustenance and my each and every...

    Hey... this is a great write indeed..I loved its concept and the beauty of sentiments of love..Indeed there is a serenity in this verse..and I do agree with the words of the beautiful write my friend..Your words here touching the depth of the muse bringing a kind of divine interpretations of the conventional
    subject so I loved its depth and the intensity of the thoughts which are just wonderful with its vision and its definate impact ..well done my friend..a great poem is here..



  • Forlorn Dreams
    July 10, 2007

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    this is beautiful. full of great detail and honest emotion. this was a very unique and different way to describe you love for someone. it made it all that much better to read since it wasnt the same ole thing everybody has been saying in all their love poems. it made me think of my love which made me happy. thank you for sharing and brightening my day with your words.
    Kelcey
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