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~Self-Centered~

I have got to get my mind... Right
I have got to get my household... Tight
I have got to keep my pockets in... Sight
And this is what I have to Do.. Right?

So who surrounds you in your Cypher
That time has passed for looking at Only Self
So what you have called circling the World
Has been in reality just circling Yourself

So look around and expand your Sight
For you have been chosen as a Mentor
It's time to acknowledge your reality's no longer about You
So Stop Running!!! By Being SELF-CENTERED

GET THE POINT

The Choice has been Made
You don't get to Choose you've been Chosen
Some are meant to take the responsibility
for overlooking the younger generation
STOP HIDING FROM YOUR REALITY
IT'S NOT ACCIDENTAL
IT'S DESTINY

GET THE POINT NOW

Holla @ Ja Boi
TX Leonard

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  • -Death-s Punchline-
    July 23, 2007
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    "STOP HIDING FROM YOUR REALITY
    IT'S NOT ACCIDENTAL
    IT'S DESTINY"

    You said it, I loved this and agree whole heartedly with what your saying. Self centered people need to wake up and this is a well written wake up call. Great job, keep
    'em coming.

    jan

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  • LunyLuna
    July 18, 2007
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    i like this part the most, "It's time to acknowledge your reality's no longer about You
    So Stop Running!!! By Being SELF-CENTERED" I almost felt like you were talking to me! not that I am self-centered but I guess we can all be like that at times. I like this one well done.

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  • a woman to love
    July 16, 2007

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    The Choice has been Made
    You don't get to Choose you've been Chosen
    Some are meant to take the responsibility
    for overlooking the younger generation
    STOP HIDING FROM YOUR REALITY
    IT'S NOT ACCIDENTAL
    IT'S DESTINY

    GET THE POINT NOW


    smiling....so many of us try avoid the issue of responsibility to self, and I dare say that is like half living. One has to confront all challenges no matter how hard they might be...good write

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  • whits end silver member
    July 9, 2007

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    I really enjoyed this piece. It is very unique. I'm at a loss for words. It is self explanitory in meaning. Keep writing. I will be looking forward to it.

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  • whits end silver member
    July 9, 2007
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    Awesome!!!!


  • Mansoor
    July 9, 2007

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    Hey man...!!! you are surely a great poet and I love the amazing write..the imagery is beautiful and strong and is very deep!! it rhymed good too at some places which was the best part..The lyrics make this one of more importance and this one is just amazing.
    this is a great job, and i look forward to read more of yours. ANd do take a look at my work too, i wud be very thankful to u for this act of kindness best of luck for more!!!
    God bless,
    Love,
    -Mansoor
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