Up all night staring at the fucking Curtains
Wondering why you cannot keep a Job
Next day, guess what! you're religious Now
Feelin guilty sayin'...What have I done again, Oh My God!!
You were on that up-path, but now a Re-Direct
Now your outlook is all Down-Hill
You wanna escape, I wish I had a video Tape
So I can watch your saga on, how I just can't Deal
Same Ol' story with No Guts, No Glory
Only how you always just give up on Yourself
No windows panes, only clear baggy Pains
As you double over from your Jonez, doubling up on Itself
You're not a P-I-M-P, You're just another Pipe Dream
You should have sat back and Contemplated
No need for regrets now and wondering How
For your ass is summed up as....~Drug Related~
Get The Point
Take A Pause and Think
The Life It Saves Could be Your Own
Focus Fuckers
Peace
Holla @ Ja Boi
TX Leonard
Please tell me what you think
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Great strongly written words of wisdom! If only the one's who need to heed these words would do so. I've lived with a drug addict for over 5yrs now and it's always a bitter battle. Favorite line: You were on that up-path but now a Re-Direct. Keep writing for that one that might listen!
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This is fresh, down to earth, no bullshit and says it like it is. You captivate the reader with your style and choice of words. Nicely done.
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This piece contains a wonderful rhythm that pushes through to the reader with such intensity, it's almost a song by itself.
I rather like the line "only clear baggy pains"
Wonderful write -
The words in this flowed amazingly; this was a very emotional write-kind of like a vent; but had a great word choice! Great job on this!
Amanda -
Omg! this one is written so beautifully and the words the vocabulary is so decent and attractive. I love the choice of words and the amazing flow which makes it more pleasant to read. I just love the imagery and the emotions mingled with it..
Its a perfect one and beautifully written.
I love this one, great job!!!
I hope u like mine too, take a look..
thanks, God bless
love,
Mansoor -
Omg! this one is written so beautifully and the words the vocabulary is so decent and attractive. I love the choice of words and the amazing flow which makes it more pleasant to read. I just love the imagery and the emotions mingled with it..
Its a perfect one and beautifully written.
I love this one, great job!!!
I hope u like mine too, take a look..
thanks, God bless
love,
Mansoor
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