If you WANTED the stars in the Sky
I WOULD do my best to - GRANT IT
If you WANTED the love of your life
I WOULD have been there to - GRANT IT
If you WANTED my heart forever
All for you, I WOULD - GRANT IT
If you WANTED me Mind, Body and Soul too
Only for you, I WOULD - GRANT IT
I WOULD work Day and Night
For your every WISH to be - GRANTED
I WOULD walk to the ends of the Earth
For your every WANT to be - GRANTED
Whatever you WANTED in life
I WOULD have been there to - GRANT IT
Whatever your WISH, Whatever your DESIRE
WOULD have been my COMMAND to - GRANT IT
But now there's NOTHING for you here
So Here's NOTHING! Its my pleasure to-GRANT IT
Because that's what happens to individuals
Who take other individuals for - GRANTED
Get The Point
Everyone's A Genie...
Just Don't Rub'em the Wrong Way...
If you take what given for Granted
Your only wish granted will be Nothing
Peace
Holla @ Ja Boi
By: TX Leonard
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Very powerful writing I find here and the truth rings loud each lines brings forth more power right down to the end taking things all things for granted will get you nothing at all so so true I am glad to have been able to read this writing
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cute
but some strange turns. eg why does a genie have to work to grant a wish. also 5th part was weak. the genie granted "nothing". work on your images please
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A very clever write. What I thought was an expression of love turned into an expression of anger. Very well put together, powerful in its simplicity. Thank you for sharing your work.
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I like it
I like how your expressed your passion in the poem.. I would love to see more imagery, though.. make your words pretty.. don't just say what needs to be said - say what's below it and above it.... -
Yep ... you speak true words ... very well done poet ... you have opened yourself up to the world ... and let them know ... the truth ... I agree with you in ever sense of your write ... you have penned a wonderful write ... so full of emotion and so powerful in it's words ... keep writing poet ... and I will continue to read ... Much Love ... Sparkeh
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