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~Lost Hotel~

Here I stand....In yet another lonely Suite
Looking out into yet another Abyss
Rain flows down large window Panes in front of Me
As yet another light flickers, in the far Distance

I wonder what’s going on in the world this Night
As I try to escape, these Walls
I’m trapped senseless in a box, of my own Senses
Where my emotions are completely safe and Cutoff

I stroll empty corridors, as yet another midnight Approaches
Knowing full well, there is no one I shall Meet
For the darkened hue of isolation, within these Pathways
Shall protect and prevent me, from being Seen

My hearth is full, or My Heart’s Disguised
I have many rooms, where my feelings Reside
I count my most trusted, on just one Hand
And they are....Me, Myself and only I

This is my safe haven, of no Illumination
Has my darkness, truly become my only friend
As I closed my eyes, to what I left behind
And opened them, to my dark world once Again

Surrounded by what life, has brought my Way
I understand now, that this is my Hell
For I am the one, who has built these lonesome Walls
For I am that......~Lost Hotel~

Get The Point

Can You Live With Yourself??

Peace
Holla @ Ja Boi
TX Leonard

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  • Jeremy0826 gold member
    November 30, 2007

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    Beautifully written piece here!
    Thanks a lot for sharing it
    and keep it up!




    Jeremy0826

  • Naridill
    November 30, 2007

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    Very dark but beautiful. Your wording and phrasing captivate this write to new lengths and I love the style you wrote this in.
    Beautiful title, fits well.

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  • Francis Vincent
    November 29, 2007

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    very good

    "For I am that......~Lost Hotel"
    superb
    the transformation is astounding
    the way you went from a "space" (hotel room) to your inner self


  • absinthia
    November 28, 2007
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    pessimistic but beautiful.there is an old deserted hotel in my neighboorhood, a beautiful neo-classic building, looks as if haunted, though sits in the very center of the city, with lots of people, and cars and noise around it. the windows arealways dark, nobody stays in its rooms and its name is "Sans Rival" (No Opponent) Great poem there!

    . Rewarded 6

  • michaeline
    November 28, 2007

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    very emotional oiece.I have found myself in that place many times is lonely and no fun.Your words were great,they couldn't have been chosen any better.Great job on description.I did like this piece as it made me reflect on my feelings and my life.

    . Rewarded 4


  • ATaintedRosesWrath
    July 17, 2007
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    Beautiful!!! :]


    ♥--T.R;

    • xxprophet gold member
      September 3, 2007

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      I'm sorry it's taken me so long to respond to your awesome feedback.

      Thank You very much for taking the time to read,connect and enjoy my write here. And much thanks and appreciateion for the excellent feedback comment.

      i truly appreciate and thank you for reading my poem very much. TXL
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