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~The Bizarre Bizaar~

Crack-Heads on the Corners
Slingers under Cover
Blow jobs for Employment
Junkies jackin' one Another

Shooting Stars....On heroin Trips
Summertime bubble coats fulla packets and Clips
Sidewalk rappers for their daily Bread
Zombie day walkers become night-times Living Dead

The Full time employed yet somehow Fully Tax Exempt
Prostitutes, Vagabonds, Pushers and Pimps
The day's invisibly retired yet the night's live Wires
Where any Love's for Sale and All Fucks for Hire

So you never have no money....To shelter your Kids
But you gotz plenty dough to tread the streets
Four wheels burning rubber on every Asphalt Corner
Tell me! Is this the life you imagined you'd Lead

All Day passings but religious at Dusk
For The Clubs, The Cars and Bars
It's No Strange Land....Yo! - It's where we all Live
So Welcome to the Fucked Up....~Bizarre Bizaar~

It's Your Neighborhood To

Peace
Holla @ ja Boi
TX Leonard

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  • individuality gold member
    August 30, 2007

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    a good piece witht he topic though the punctuation and grammar here needs some works for example to at the end should be too and ellipses are three dots only

  • MagicaI
    July 29, 2007
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    Endless drug rhyme, and it all comes together! You id a good Job. Hope best of luck in any contest you enter and hope you keep on writing. Btw, last paragraph was sweet.

    "Shooting Stars....On herorin Trips,Summertine bubble coats fulla packets and Clips"

    My favorite lines. Good work. No doubt.

    . Rewarded 6


  • Melissa Powell
    July 27, 2007
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    this was great. a real life poem. good write I think

  • mommymouse
    July 25, 2007

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    Great choice or words

    This tells the harsh truth of things i really enjoyed reading it and agree that it reads more like a song or possibly a rap.

    . Rewarded 4


  • natchstucco
    July 21, 2007

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    great lyrics here

    I believe you have the lines for a great song going on here. I know your style and think you have a great gift for the song writing. Have you tried to get any one to put this to music?

    It's Your Neighborhood To


    . Rewarded 4

  • PsHyCo PoEtRy
    July 9, 2007

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    unique and original!

    finally a poem that gets to the point! interesting way of rhyming...it seems like its that kind of poem where its better if the author recited it.I still enjoyed it though. I look forward to reading more of your works!
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