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My Blue-Eyed Babe

the burning light
the blinding light
oh beautiful, beautiful light.
that blue-eyed babe

he sang me to sleep
with his lullaby of blue-eyed dreams.
he whisked me away
to stormy seas and azure lagoons
and whispered sapphire thoughts in my ears.
the burning light
the blinding light
the blissful, blissful light.
thou shine and shine,
oh please be mine?
yes, let's combine
and fold into a cobalt sky of wondering, wondering wondrousness.

what vast blue eyes you have, my dear!
ships do sink and maidens do weep
and all because of cerulean eyes.

oh, oh, please be mine?
i would gladly drown in your blue, blue eyes.

you could be my blue-eyed babe.

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  • SnappledApples
    May 22, 2007
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    Really great, cute, awesome poem! Who doesn't love a guy with eyes like those?


  • madgirlslovesong
    May 22, 2007

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    SHA LA LA LA

    oh my my!!!

    tee hee!!! fabulous poem!!!! oh i could just SWWOOOON over a guy with eyes like those... drown me in them now...
    i lovedenjoyedimmensely the lines:
    thou shine and shine
    oh please be mine?
    yes, let's combine

    greatttttnessss.... oh how i heart blue eyes.

    p.s. how do u make a heart symbol on AP?


    • SnappledApples
      May 22, 2007
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      To make a heart symbol, you do this: & hearts ; (without the spaces.) it makes this: ♥ (if that's what you were talking about.)