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Big Sky

Twist--
knotted
(whisper slow)
"The sunflowers..."
buzz of crickets, loud
my ears hum-- nothing stirs
(but) the grass, matted by us.
We wrestle (rustle), my skin sticky
[sweet] under this ardent sky, (we) sigh

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  • Samplette gold member
    May 21, 2007

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    A very nicely written nonet. Great imagery throughout. I thank you for entering the contest. Great job.
    Sam