To feel your strong arms as they're wrapped
Around me so tightly, vise-like.
Kissing so deep and passionately,
Every nerve electrified.
Memories made, last forever
Your eyes look into my soul,
Blue and beautiful like your heart.
Relentless; this feeling of love,
Eternally it grows deeper.
Amazing, the way your touch can
Take my breath away so readily.
Heavenly my desires,
As you fulfill my every need.
We go together, hand in glove.
A matching pair, made in heaven,
You are my one and only love.
Joyce Le Lievre
(sunny day)
© Joyce A. Le Lievre, All rights reserved
May 21, 2007
Author notes
sunny day
This is also an entry for my group, The Titles Challenge Group.
Background courtesy of; http://www.artistic-designers.com/bkgds/
In a list
A contest entry
- A Family Picnic, Invite Only by Lady-Pegasus.
1050 points, ended June 21, 2007, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is sweet- and fun. There is a lot of love and whimsy- and it isn't so easy to write a good acrostic- believe me, I've tried! I really enjoyed this and also loved the border design. Cheers for your entry!
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TillyMay, Thank you for the applauses and your lovely words of praise you gave to me here. I do love acrostics and I remember how tough they were when I first started to write them. The border is from a free site and for those that can add custom backgrounds I have credited the site in a link below the poem. I'm very happy that you enjoyed this so much. This was a joy to write and the feeling that I get. Love and God bless, Joyce
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This is a beautifu piece that i thoroughly enjoyed reading, so ramntic and full of imagery in its own way. Best of luck in the contest!
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Onionducks, Thank you very much for the lovely words of praise you gave to me here. I'm very happy that you enjoyed it so much and thank you for the best wishes also. Love and God bless, Joyce
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This is beautiful. I enjoyed it so much. I hope you win. Keep writing and I am sure to read more.
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Tabitha, Thank you so much for the lovely words of praise you gave to me here. I am humbled by your compliment and even if it doesn't win, it was a joy to write for my hubby. Love and God bless, Joyce
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This is a gorgeous write, I do love acrostic form and you have captured the emotion and feeling in this piece, brilliantly, superb flow
Karen
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Karen, Thank you very much for the applauses and your lovely words of praise here. I also love acrostics and it was my turn to choose the titles for the week in our group. This is one of my favorite songs from the Top Gun soundtrack. I'm very happy that it spoke to you as it did. Love and God bless, Joyce
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This is lovely, everything about it is lovely. If it weren't for the colored letters, I would never know it was an acrostic. The flow is smooth and the image breath taking. I love the background; I wish we still wore clothes like that.
Love,
Amera
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Amera, Thank you very much for the applauses and your lovely words. It was my turn to choose the titles for the week when I did this one. I do love acrostics and especially when they flow. I'm very happy that you enjoyed this so much, although I don't know about wearing such clothes as these. LOL
Love and God bless you my friend, Joyce
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This was a wonderful acrostic. Please tell your two nana wielding pals that their comments detract from the sanctity of this poem. lol. This was a terrific use of our group title. I have to put my thinking cap on and get to work so that cheeky will let me have one of her nanas. Peace, Liz
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Liz, Thank you for the lovely words of praise and the humor to go along with it. Tossing a fresh nana to you with a big grin.
They are good and I share with cheeky all the time. 
I'm very happy you enjoyed this one. I had to write for all the titles last week or I would look a little silly seeing as I chose the titles. LOL Love and God bless you my friend, Joyce
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SO TENDER AND LOVING!
You have painted this sweet and tender picture of a love so sincere and honest, a truly beautiful write my friend.
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Kevin, Thank you for the applauses and your lovely words of praise. I did the titles for last week in my group and chose them all from cd's in my collection. I'm very happy that you enjoyed what I did with this one. Love and God bless you my dear friend, Joyce
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Thank you for your contest submission as well as for following the rules. LOL saw the title and went, 'hehe I know this title', lmao. Nice acrostic and such a wonderfully tender sentiment, you KNOW where it took me to, of course!
A few places maybe check your grammar/spelling, but that is just technical stuff and no great detraction from this wonderful write! Best of luck in this and all of your endeavors. Hetohke'e
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Lady P, Thank you so very much for the applauses and your lovely words of praise here. I hope this title looked familiar, I chose it for last week. LOL
Thank you for hosting and inviting me as well. I'm very happy that you enjoyed and thank you for the best wishes also. I did check my spelling and grammar again. 
Love and God bless you my friend, Joyce
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awsome acrostic best of luck to you in the contest sits back n waits for you throw me nannas heeheee xxxxxxxx
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*throws you a nanner and watches as you try to peaal and eat the plastic thing hehe*
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No plastic nannas for cheeky or me. We got the fresh ones now.
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mmmmm nice nanna fanx Lady P x
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You don't need to eat those plastic ones there cheeky. We will share the fresh ones I picked up at the market.
mmmmmmmmmmmmmm now these are good nannas.
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*shakes head wiff smile at silly minkee eating plastic fruit*
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I got my cheeky one some fresh nannas at the market.
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A wonderful and beautiful Acrostic,
so packed with many great emotions of love,
Very nice flow, flawless. wonderful wonderful wonderful
Love and Light
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Tearz, Thank you so very much for the lovely words of praise you gave to me. I chose the titles last week for the group and took them all from different cd's. This one came off of the Top Gun sound track. I'm very happy that you enjoyed it so much. Your compliments are quite humbling.
Love and God bless you my friend, Joyce
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yes, i like this, i can't help but really like this, i mean that, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest, this poes fits it's title for it is truly breathtaking
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Aaron, Thank you again for such lovely words of praise to me. You are always so encouraging and you inspire me even more. I'm very happy that this one was so breathtakin to you. I took it from the song on the Top Gun sound track. I chose the titles last week and went with all songs from different cd's. LOL Thank you for the best wishes also. Love and God bless you my friend, Joyce
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hold on one second while I catch my breath! .... ok... this was a great acrostic. I loved it!
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going, Again I thank you for such lovely words of praise to go along with your applauses. I would love to up the rating and there are no stars to add to it.
You are always giving me such high praise and I can't thank you enough. I'm very happy that you enjoyed this one so much and I hope you caught your breath. Don't let it get too far away, you won't be able to chase it down. LOL Love and God bless you my friend, Joyce
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what a wonderful love acrostic! i just love it! it has such depth of meaning...not just words strung together for a contest. these have real meaning. this reminds me of my hubby and i. superbly written. thank you for sharing this! keep writing! God bless you always
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Debilynn, Thank you very much for the applauses and your lovely words of praise. I usually like to try and rhyme these as well, this just wouldn't have seemed right if I tried to fit it in. I just let the words flow from my heart. I'm very happy that you enjoyed this so much and that it reminds you of you and your hubby. It is a wonderful feeling. Love and God bless you my friend, Joyce
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excellent
excellent protrail (sp?).... this is one of my favorites to write as well as read..
Yvonne
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Yvonne, Thank you very much for the applauses and your lovely words of praise. Acrostics are so fun and one of the first form poems that I learned. I'm very happy that you enjoyed this one so much. Love and God bless you my friend, Joyce
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Nice work on this acrostic. Vice - as in vice grip - NOW that's LOVE. I loved it. ~Pam
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I just double checked that grip. It was right in using vise grip.
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Yes indeed you are!
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Pam, Thank you for the applauses and your lovely words of praise. Thank you for catching that error too. LOL Darn spellcheck won't catch those ones. I'm very happy that you enjoyed this one so much. Love you my friend, Joyce
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Lovely
Oh wow...this is a beautiful acrostic for love
It was a joy to read...
Good luck in the contest
XXJeannette
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Jeannette, Thank you so very much for the applauses and your lovely words. I'm very happy that you enjoyed this so much and I thank you for the best wishes also. Love and God bless you my friend, Joyce
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