you know you're having a bad day when
you can't seem to find your brain
and you're tripping over words that make no sense,
and you miss him, but you don't know why,
considering what an asshole he is.
A contest entry
- You Know You Are Having A Bad Day When... by SmokinHotWhiteTiger.
600 points, ended May 22, 2007, 23 entries
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LOL this is fabulous. & very clever, as well. I hope you won the contest. & I'm gonna check out some of your other stuff now, 'cause this is bewtiful
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I've had this day so many times, I've lost count. It's insane, the kind of torment a girl continually puts herself through when she loves a man like that.
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Oy!
Oyyyyyyyyyy! I can understand this poem and LOL though to it. I can relate to the missing part cept about her not him LOL and she was an asshole towards me as well. Tripping over words that don't make sense now thats something I have done a few times likewise we all have done espcially in a foreign lanmguage LOL. this is quite an interesting poem and very well penned best of luck to yas -
Yuuuuuuup
This is another good one in this contest
and you miss him, but you don't know why,
considering what an asshole he is
So true
So true
Well done, you captures it brilliantly
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omg behbeh this is amazing!!!
I love it!!!
you are so freaking creative and genius!!
Amazing job baby pie!
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hunny i know how you feel in this poem!!!!!!
well if you need to talk just call me hunn!!
i love you victoria byebye!
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