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On my own

Stand up & face it,
the cold wont hurt you
& loneliness is only a dream
That you can't escape.

I'm sick of feeling
like I can't do right.



[Why wasn't I enough for you?]


Dropped, smashing bones,
now I really am broken,
& guess what it's all
[your fault]


But no matter,
I don't need you,
& I shall face this all




[On my own]

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  • oh willoughby
    May 22, 2007

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    "But no matter,
    I don't need you,
    & I shall face this all




    [On my own]"

    such a GREAT poem!!!!!!!!!

    -dax


  • May 21, 2007
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    I'll tell you, because you said please... Very good i prefer this one!