With broken bones and open wounds
Through this life and into the next
I cannot let you down
So I march on
I promised to never fail you
To prove this to you I go on
I will march forever
With broken bones and open wounds
My tears hit the earth
I must still stand strong
As to never let you down
I give my heart to you
The pain is so intense
I do not stagger from my path
I must not fail
With broken bones and open wounds
I give you all my love
I fall to the ground
I haven’t failed you
I have proven my love
I came to you
The happiness takes over
I look into your eyes
I have kept my promise
With broken bones and open wounds
I am grateful to have you
And I shall never leave your side
I rest in peace
With broken bones and open wounds
A contest entry
- Dark Love by OurxBeginning.
300 points, ended May 24, 2007, 26 entries
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Comments
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Welcome to Allpoetry
The repetition in this was actually rather well done. I enjoyed the way there was hope in this, despite the loss and pain..
Faerie - Site Greeter
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A lot of emotion is in this. It's deep and the imagery is done very well. The reader can feel and picture it all. Thank you for entering and good luck.
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this was a great write....your words were strong, powerful and emotional to...they flowed really well to...keep writting your talented and good luck in the contest
~Chrissy~
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