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one night while sleeping something happened, but what i dont know.
i know i woke up to you saying you gotta go.
in the blink of an eye the skies got dark, my world got cold.
you said you'd be back because it was me you wanted to hold.
but when you left i saw the look in your eye, that look that says this is our last goodbye.
i wanted to believe that you were coming home,
but deep down inside i knew i was alone.
that was way in the past,
and to this day it is kicking my ass!!!!!!!

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  • PsychoAnalysis
    October 9, 2008
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    this is very good. The emotion is amazing...I hope all goes well...

  • coolleychic
    June 19, 2007

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    Heart felt..

    Wonder why love has to hurt the way it does even for many years to come..? Would you rather have loved and lost then never to have loved at all?


  • VanityAngst
    May 21, 2007
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