For everything you did to me, karma will come and eat you.
Through me, karma will work, and you will get what everyone gets from me.
Lifetime of hate
I remember the day we met.
Do you?
I knew that this would get harder.
Well it did.
I’ve been holding to my lifetime of loneliness.
I’ve promised myself that i would never fall.
i thought i would kill if i ever hear those words,
and all i want to do is kill myself.
the damage is done.
the cuts are getting deeper.
six feet under sounds so sweet.
I'm coming back from the dead and
taking back the life you stole.
This overdose helps me to think all through the night.
Bright lights that kill me now wont help now.
Just you and I, and your blank eyes remain.
You talk to me, but I have to sleep with one eye open.
You would you kill me in my sleep
Just lay still there like the dead
We could lose ourselves, drive ourselves insane.
and paint these walls with red rum
I'm coming back from the dead and
taking back the life you stole.
And with every breathe I steal I shall lay claim on revenge.
The hole that you stuck my coffin in is no longer my jail cell.
It wasn't deep enough
and I'm climbing out right now
When I kill you it will bitter sweet.
Dying was the hardest part.
Just watching are fall out play.
Changing the colors from a lively pastel to neon notes.
Just know that I will remember you,
and what you did to this poor girl.
This overdose helps me to think all through the night.
Bright lights that kill me now wont help now.
Just you and I, and your blank eyes remain.
I lost my fear of falling.
Falling….falling…..falling….
falling over the cliff of death.
Author notes
inspired by my chemical romance lyrics (its not a fashion statement, its a fucking deathwish)
option 1 (for the optoins contest)
A contest entry
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Comments
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This is a very interestng piece, very well written!
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This one really makes me sad because it is one of my favorite songs...but it is actively in another contest...if it doesn't win a trophy (which would suprise me) then you may enter it once those contests are finished.
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This is a great write and I enjoyed it.


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I really lov this poem because it's orginal and it's full of wild emotions i really like the lines
[This overdose helps me to think all through the night.
Bright lights that kill me now wont help now.
Just you and I, and your blank eyes remain.]
very creative and good luck! -
nice..i absalutely(sry i duno how 2spel it) love it!!!
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