Release my soul with your kiss once more
The rotten truth, the love filled gore
I cannot see, what haunts me so
But blood loss is, what I know
Whenever I’m with you
I can feel it, my wrists burn
But you take me on a passionate ride
Where the roads just twist and turn
Stop looking so beautiful
I just might have to scream
You’re like a siren baby (yeah)
That’s come from out my dream
They want dark love baby
I say we got it going
(We got it going real bad)
This deep calming flow
Of you and I is coming from what we had
Pain no game
Pain no game
Pain no game
This dark our shame
This dark our shame
But you? Equal perfection just the same.
A contest entry
- Dark Love by OurxBeginning.
300 points, ended May 24, 2007, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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that was GOOD! so beautiful! i didnt think someone w/ the name Pizza could write so well!
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These are really good lyrics, and would sound good to like rock or metal. Loved the idea of still being perfect in the dark. Short but powerful. Thank you for entering and good luck.
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this was a great write...i really enjoyed reading this...it flowed really well and smoothly..your words were also strong, powerful and emotional as well keep writting your talented and good luck in the contest
~Chrissy~ -
This is a lovely piece. Painful bliss. I like the emotion on your words and flow. Lovely.
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