Those songs of passion
reminds me of you,
Like the brightness of a summer day
in your smile,
Touched only on an echo
wherein we meet,
And in our beginning
the necessities of life
is more rich,
For we touch in ways
some cannot imagine,
Could it be
that we see things
in each others eyes ?
And in that revelation
the poetry that touches our hearts
reveals more
than what some find
in a lifetime,
Whisper to me
those secrets that you yearn to tell
and I'll find
a miracle within a soul.
April 22, 2000
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Written January 8th, 2002
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I love this. I hope to be as good at showing my thoughts and feelings the way that you do yourself
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I like this poem a LOT, it has emotion and passion that touches me. Now, that is what I am all about. Touch me with your words and I will listen, this one does that for me.
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wow, alot of people love your poetry huh? lol I don't blame them though, you're really good. Amazing actually. I have met so many talented people on this site. Great work!!
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Beautiful and deeply emotional. I enjoyed reading and the picture is awesome. It definitely holds your attetion throughout! I love the lines:
the poetry that touches our hearts
reveals more
than what some find
in a lifetime,
Whisper to me
those secrets that you yearn to tell
and I'll find
a miracle within a soul.
Wonderful message
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OoOoO!! This was VERY deep!! Wonderful wonderful job! -
I love this one.. i especially love the lines "Touched only on an echo
wherein we meet,
And in our beginning
the necessities of life
is more rich,
For we touch in ways
some cannot imagine," Good Job
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This is lovely, Bill! Love poems have a special place in my heart!
<3 Maureen
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This is amazing.
See I trekked in on my own and
found a poem that seemed to speak right
through me.
You seem to have a common heart with me.
So always seem to say the things I have
all bnuilt up in my head, but am too afraid,
or jumbled to pen them down.
Another absolutely wonderful write.
Totally breathtaking.
~*Amy*~ -
Beautiful and of course I just had to read it.
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Thank you bucherie !
I'm glad you enjoyed the writing ! -
beautiful...
the poetry that touches our hearts
reveals more
than what some find
in a lifetime,
how impressively true..regards
soumaya -
Thank you Pseudoprincess !
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aww so sweet! i loved it ! great write!
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thank you Amberdawn !
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Fantastic piece!
Sammy -
Romantic! Lovely writing
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