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The Giver

Passion, heart on FIRE
Melting into, swollen desire
Morphed into her empty soul
Raging hormones take control

Her kiss drives me so mad
Against her breasts I rest my head
Fingers trail endlessly
Pleasure builds inside of me

Her moan echoes in my ear
Soft and sweet when I'm near
I dive, into her warm embrace
Between her legs you'll find my face

To send the chills up her spine
All I know, is how she's mine
Moistened tendril creeps inside
Pushing gently, "Part your thighs."

Her body quivers, violently
Her voice continues, calling to me
I increase the pressure now
Her words echo, ring aloud

Her swollen sex I then please
My hands still her body tease
She grabs my head, comfortably
Pressing herself into me

Finally when all is done
I taste the sweetness of her cum
And then awake from this dream
Drenched myself in passions creme...

Such a fantasy I'll grant her when she takes my life...
In our room...
as my wife...

If you wish to please your women so...Holla!

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  • Rhaine Adair
    June 8, 2007
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    Interesting.

    Good job. I agree with "A Murderous Ament" Very good.


  • A Murderous Lament
    May 22, 2007

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    Great. Awesome poem! The beginning was amazing and the flow was perfect till the middle somewheres it fell a bit but it was awesome. Great write.

    A MURDEROUS LAMENT <\33


  • Achaila
    May 21, 2007

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    -blushes-

    Oh my god honey.

    This poem made my heart beat WAY to fast. ;3

    I love it, I nearly cried at the ending. I love you so much, mhmmm and I can't wait till we have our own room.

    <333