my dark love is like the sea billows rolling
its there then it's gone.
love is dark, hatred, and lonely.
until you meet the right one.
you'll never understand love until you're hurt
love is dark. until you make it light.
Author notes
may not be perfect...but it;ll do!!
A contest entry
- Dark Love by OurxBeginning.
300 points, ended May 24, 2007, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
ugh sorry if you dont' like it...im just getting use to this!!
Comments
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How true is some of this pieces. Loved the last line. A lot of emotion within a few words. Short but filled with meaning. Thank you for entering and good luck.
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this was a great write and i really enjoyed reading this....your words were strong powerful and emotional as well..i enjoyed reading this alot keep writting your talented and good luck in the contest
~Chrissy~
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