lying through your teeth
daily routine
whisper those words
those empty words
with a knife to my throat
so I'll say it back
long ago
this meant something
now it's gone
it means nothing
and it's been to long
you've been so wrong
I'm writing my hate
in every word of this song
so I'll put a gun to your head
watch you fall down dead
I laughed at you
as you slowly bled
my hands stained red
I feel alive
that's more than you can say
isn't it darling
fueled by this bloodrush
I'll hide away
die now
in this pool of tears
I can't believe
it took so many years
and it's been to long
you've been so wrong
I'm writing my hate
in every word of this song
so I'll put a gun to your head
watch you fall down dead
I laughed at you
as you slowly bled
I'll bury you
until we meet again
and it's been to long
you've been so wrong
I'm writing my hate
in every word of this song
so I'll put a gun to your head
watch you fall down dead
I laughed at you
as you slowly bled
until we meet again
Author notes
this is a song i wrote. i have connections through my uncle to the music business and he liked my writing so i decided to write the lyrics to an entire album. this is the last one i wrote.
A contest entry
- Dark Love by OurxBeginning.
300 points, ended May 24, 2007, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Give Me DARKNESS! by On Frail Wings..
340 points, ended May 23, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - All The Vengence We Seek by Marc-Andrews.
319 points, ended June 26, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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"I'm writing my hate
in every word of this song
so I'll put a gun to your head
watch you fall down dead
I laughed at you
as you slowly bled"
This could be a fantastic song
I hope you actually bring this album out... It could potentally be Very good..
Thank you for entering the contest -
so I'll put a gun to your head
watch you fall down dead
I laughed at you
as you slowly bled
intense!
I love this song, its (scary I know) beautiful! Its so full of emotions and its powerfull and you made it completely yyours. Its not like music you hear every day!
well done.
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this was a great write...your words were strong, powerful and emotional as well...i really enjoyed reading this...keep writting your talented and good luck in the contest
~Chrissy~ -
nice
this is a good song. -
This is interesting. Very different, holds a lot of emotion. I could really picture this all in my mind. I liked the ending, wraps it up. Thanks for entering and good luck to you.
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WOW!
I really like this. Very deep and meaningful. Yuo'll do awesome in this contest. Good luck!
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I watched you add this...I like this ALOT!!!! Its awesome I think that with your writting maybe you will write MCR next album...
Love ya, Lillie -
i like it. it makes me think of the past year and everything the blonde people went through later its really good though i hope i actually hear it one day
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