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Don't Let Those Tears Fall From Your Eyes

Please, honey, don’t cry…
It’s for the best, you know…
Darling, don’t make this any harder…
It’s hard enough as it is.
God damn it, don’t fucking do that.
Don’t let those tears fall from your eyes.

I thought this had ended.
You knew damn well this would happen.
Don’t try to change the subject.
I’m not the one who did this.
You did this when you decided to go that way.
I told you not to. You didn’t listen.

I explained to you the consequences.
You knew that I hate cheaters.
Yet, you did it anyway.
Don’t you fucking cry!!
You did this to yourself.
…I just let it end.

How many times do I have to tell you?
I didn’t do this…why are you blaming me?
It’s your own fault, you know.
It’s for the best…you know it is.
Don’t make this any harder, PLEASE!
Don’t let those tears fall from your eyes.

I really could care less what you think…
I didn’t…I didn’t…God, no…
I did… It was me.
The reason you felt this way…
It was my fault….shit, it’s my fault.
I didn’t love you enough to make you stay.

Honey, please…
It’s for the best, I’m broken.
Please don’t make this any worse…
Bad enough…
Damn it, don’t!!
Let those tears fall...from those beautiful eyes…

Author notes

Option 1, my dear. Inspired by title and Bliss (I Don't Wanna Know) by Hinder. Enjoy it. It's not that great cause it's a rough sketch of the idea to get across. Mild cussing, I know. Also gets the point across. Anyway, I'll stop boring you with notes. Have a great day. Nice contest, btw! ^_^

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  • NightSkyGirl
    May 26, 2007

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    This was an interesting poem. On one part it was like having an argument with someone else, on the other it was like having an argument with oneself. I liked the twist it took, from blaming the other to blaming yourself. Sad.


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    May 26, 2007
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    what is ur username on allpoetry coz i cant find you on my list 0.0 but it might just be me...wow this was strong and you could imagine the argument going on in my head like imagine what they were saying. the emotions in it were consistant and strong throughout the poem...well done and good luck but could you please send me details of poem entered in last contest


  • Wrozes Thorne
    May 21, 2007
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    aww, it's so sad. i just wanna cry, it's so good!