Delightfully warm,
this soothing liquid envelops me.
Wrapped in warm, effervescent bliss
as I lay marinating.
Desiring to stay
for hours on end,
steam whispering around me.
Wrapped in a soothing blanket
of peaceful calm
as my worries spiral down the drain.
Author notes
Zephyr Aryn's advice: baths feel SSOOOOO gooood! I wish I could lay there and marinate for an eternity. Yep; this is what I would be doing if I could right now.
A contest entry
- Today Only by Lady-Pegasus.
525 points, ended May 22, 2007, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Just say what you feel needs telling...or have one of those random whims to comment on something.
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Thank you for your contest submission as well as for following the rules. *SIGH* !!!! Oh how I miss baths! I ahvena had one in YEARS !
oh wait that sounded wrong, LOL I mean i have showered, of course but, due to medical issues, getting in the tub and sitting in one is no longer an option, teehee 
Well, wnyway, I digress! This is a wonderful rendition of the prompt and the flow and imagery are excellent! 
Best of luck in this and all of your endeavors. 
Hetohke'e 
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A soothing warm relaxing feeling. Nice poem. smacked myself upside the head. I could of had a bath. I took a shower. God Bless you and good luck in the contest. return the favor.
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Beautiful
This sounds so relaxing...
I can really relate to the way you feel here.
Your diction helped to create such a well written, serene poem.
Well done and good luck.
tender-butterfly
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Beautiful
This sounds so relaxing...
I can really relate to the way you feel here.
Your diction helped to create such a well written, serene poem.
Well done and good luck.
tender-butterfly
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Baths take time, and to me all is always in a rush. Showers are quicker so usually take them, but can understand the sentiments you express so well in these short lines - that soaking, taking time for just you, letting it all go - sounds heavenly.
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I normally shower, too...except today I had a bath which I haven't done for a long time. I couldn't bear to get out.
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