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All Good

To have a feeling
so strong
you feel like noone cared
all along

You run and run
but you cant hide
you cut and cut
and adrenaline takes a ride

You end up
real messed up
and all the stuff
just piles up

More and more
the pile seems
to revisit
in your dreams

So you finally try
to end it all
the next thing you know
your at the fall

to die has been
your wildest dream
to wake up from this nightmare
and scream

Your parents make arrangements
for your own good
the nuxt thing you know
your covered in a hood

the food sucks
and the pain kills
your no longer the one
behind the stearing wheel

can you do it
get out and stay out
help yourself scream
help yourself shout

You finally get out
the feeling is good
but was it all worth it
is it really all good ?

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    May 22, 2007
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    an interesting question to ask yourself, i have asked my self the first one from time to time, and as for this poem i have never experince something strongly like this, a little but not a lot, keep it flowing i like this poem, the feel of it is familar