She's the enchantment in my garden
And of woodland fairy glades.
Sweet perfume always follows her,
With delicate beauty, she parades.
At night, the scent envelopes me,
As she flits among the flowers,
Sprinkling on her fairy essence,
For refreshing morning showers.
The tinkle of her pure white bells,
Echoes softly, as she flies.
If I listen very carefully,
I can hear them when I rise.
Only in the early morning,
Her fleeting presence can be seen.
Lovely Lily Of The Valley,
The flower fairy Queen.
A contest entry
- Fairy Picture Contest by Little Eagle.
650 points, ended June 4, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Rhyming Ramblings by piccola.
700 points, ended July 20, 2007, 29 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Honorable mentions only by Kappa Pyua.
600 points, ended August 30, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - TEN THOUSAND POINTS OF RHYME! (now 15,000) - Part 5 Fantasy by cricketjeff.
1250 points, ended January 3, 2008, 39 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Many thanks for taking part in contest 5. ‘Fantasy’ in our rounds of contests in the Rhyming Extravaganza.
We have been surprised by the wide range of entries that we have had and the standard has been exceptionally high.
Please join us in the future rounds and enter writes that we would love to read and enjoy.
Thanks again for your entry,
Sue and Jeff
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My favorite flower and you have penned so wonderfully about her. The art is beautiful too. thank you for this wonderful entry,
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Thank you for your entry
Beautiful. The flow is perfect. Nice rhythm and rhyme. I can get lost in your words. I don't even need the picture to see the image you have created with your poem. A lovely softness and magic fills every word.
Thanks for the read and good luck.
God Bless
Tammy -
Beautiful
Wow! I loved this perfect write. You have taken the photo and captured the essence of it. Beautifully orchestrated.
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The words that you used are perfect I can imagine myself reciting this poem to my daughter to soothe her Excellent Write
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This poem is exactly what the title suggests; enchanting!
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awesome poem really liked it. the flow was excellent as was the whole emotion and feeling to it. perfect word choice. the thoughts were clear and simple, yet you left it vague enough wich is perfect. the emotion was very strong, and it was really poetic and amazing and truly from the heart.
I especially loved this part;
At night, the scent envelopes me,
As she flits among the flowers,
Sprinkling on her fairy essence,
For refreshing morning showers.
incredible write.
thanks for the amazing read
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sweet. Lovely picture, and great interpretation. very well done, and the meter is lovely
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Excellent Poem
i like fairy's they are very unique,and mystic.Great work!Lisa K Haslett Raytown Missouri!
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Very sweet
This is a very sweet and delicate poem, just like
the flower.
Good luck Ann
Dixie
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