i could be at home watching tv and playing games
i would probley be in bryan with my friends
life would be so much better if i had a day to relax
today i could be writting stories and poems at home
i would still be in bed at this time if i was at home
doing other things today would be so much better
Please tell me what you think
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Thank you for your contest submission, I do need to ask you review the rules and edit your submission appropriately. Please reply IN COMMENTS to me and let me know this has been done, thank you. I will allow until the end of the day for edits.
This is a cute little write, short but to the point. I do suggest a brief spelling review and even in lower case writes it is considered better form to capitalize the personal pronoun "I".
Best of luck in this and all of your endeavors. 
Hetohke'e 
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lol
lol i luv it!! i sometimes feel like that.
good luck in thhe contest!
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So many things we wish we were doing instead of waht we are. A holiday here today, no school at all. But ut us raining and that cuts out yard work. Hope you get your wishone day!
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This is funny
This is probably what my kids are thinking as they sit at school as well.
( Check your second line though sweetie)
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Very cute write my friend good way to spend your time!
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This is a fun write! I like the simple phrasing of sentences and the straight forwardness of the write! I d suggest a little space on the top and bottom to give some space to your entry! Otherwise entertaining write!!
Thanks for sharing..
hugs n kisses
preets
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