Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Seeing Eyes Are Blind

 

Seeing eyes are blind,

compassion isn't given.

Hearts get colder with each beat,

no care of how the homeless are living.

 ~

Many scoff with great disgust,

they judge and misplace the blame.

If they'd take a good look at themselves,

they'd hang their heads in shame.

 ~

Sticken with desease or illnesses,

called for a hospital stay.

No insurance to cover their bill,

now society makes them pay.

 ~

Lost jobs and back taxes,

 took away their home.

Now in the heat or freezing cold,

mindlessly they roam.

 ~

Homeless shelters or missions,

feed them then offer a bed.

Many stay out on the streets,

no place to rest their head.

 ~

Seeing eyes are blind,

compassion isn't given.

Hearts get colder with each beat,

no care of how the homeless are living.

~

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 12 of 12

  • Kelli Marie
    May 3, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    This is so sad and so true. If not but the grace of God we could be homeless as well. We should all be giving help to them. Congratulations on the silver.
    Kelli


  • meanderingbear
    July 10, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    Wise words and very well written. I enjoyed the rhyming and admire how you were able to write your thoughts and say so much in rhyme. This is a thought provoking piece and your silver trophy was well deserved!

    Carolyn


  • Swan song gold member
    June 11, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    This is a very well executed poem that converys well the plight of th ehomeless. I think thre are many poeple
    who don't realize how close they are to being in this situation. Very good!

  • goalsv
    June 3, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    Congrats on the silver! Great poem listing the reasons some end up homeless, I pray your poem will also inspire others to reach in their heart and find what they can do to help another!


  • Legend silver member
    June 3, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    My congratulations on a wonderful poem and your richly deserved award A poet I always expect to see up there no matter what the contest You never let me down Excellent


  • Frozentearz
    June 3, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    Congratulations on your award it was an honor to award this to you, Thanks for sharing,
    and Blessings to you and yours.
    Warm thoughts
    Frozentearz


  • Frogzter gold member
    May 27, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    Sam, this brought tears to my eyes. The entries in this contest are so full of compassion and love.... if only everyone could see things just as you have penned them here! This one touched me deeply!

    Blessings and best wishes,

    Frogz~

  • Legend silver member
    May 27, 2007
    Edit | Reply
    It is said that you can judge a nation by the way it treats its Old, Sick. Poor< such a sad reflection on the way most nations full short in their treatment of those less fortunate. A poem that reflect these faults Well done Good luck in the contest


  • Harrisham Minhas
    May 24, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    This is touching write and its true that not much is done for the homeless and some people just don't care at all.
    Nicely written.


  • Frozentearz
    May 21, 2007
    Edit | Reply
    This gives us a good look at life around us,
    and gives us much food to ponder over, I think your title says it all, "Seeing Eyes Are Blind"
    It is time for the world to really see what is going on around us.
    Thank you for sharing and digging deep.
    Warm thoughts
    Frozentearz


  • troyias
    May 21, 2007

    Edit | Reply

    Beautifully Written

    Filled with emotion and pain. The flow is wonderful and the rythem is beautiful. Words well chosen and the truth of the piece tho true is extreamly true and sad. Well done.

    *Go with God* my Friend,

    Valerie


  • Ryno
    May 21, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    This was almost like a rant penned in a nice, but powerful verse. Bold and strong message you've rained through this one. Excellent work.

    Ryan

1 - 12 of 12