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Single Rose

You never saw me crying
Or sitting there alone.
Listeng to suicide music
You never suspected a thing.

Blood stained clothes
You didn't even ask.
Black clothes and Make-up
You thought it was a phase.

All the pain forgotten love
Bleeding of a broken heart.
Pinking up the razor
Making sure its still sharp.

Cutting away blood rushing
All over me and the floor.
My arm gone from white to red
The pain is fading away.

I wish you knew how I was feeling
I wish you'd take notice.
Only wearing long sleeves
And yet you still don't ask.

You never saw the pain in my eyes
Its like you don't know me mom.
Do you know how much it hurts
When you make me feel unloved.

I can't take it anymore
Being the forgotten one.
Always living in pain
Always crying it's not fair.

I write a long letter
Titled Mom and Dad.
I seal it with a tear
And say Im sorry.

One last time I slice
Droping to the floor.
Laying there my body so cold
Laying there next to a single rose.

Author notes

Nash Equals Broken
"I don't know"

Words

Razor
Sharp
Blood
Love
Alone
Music
Heart
Rushing
Rose
Crying
Sorry
Black
Red
Eyes
Feeling
Tear
Mom
Cold
Pain
Dad

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  • erininthesky
    May 23, 2007

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    I really like this one, it reminds me of a phase that I went through during my lifetime, I like the line about black clothes and such, and good luck in your contest!! ♥ Erin


    • Tilted-Misschief
      May 23, 2007
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      Thanks

      Thank you for your comment Erin =]
      I appreciate and thanks for the luck too

      Nash


  • xlilliexdiesx
    May 22, 2007
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    i really like it and can so relate good luck


  • Bohemianwriter
    May 21, 2007
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    if my poem was to lose* to this one (sorry i made a mistake in the first comment) lol

  • Bohemianwriter
    May 21, 2007

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    i love this!

    this was amazing!!!!.....i loved every word you used, that described my exact feeling!! a great write!!!.....i wish you all the luck in the contest!! if my poem was to lost to this one...i wouldnt mind!!

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