Grey curved features of change
perfect lines which dont shape
not dent, eyes lined with black, staring
slumping awkwardly, flailing with mind
waning confidence, surrounds doupt of existence
the air of change burns, as time
fails to consider situation, of control brings
intent to deliver
you are the dependant variable, of slumped dull
beings, risen from the darkness
Author notes
Dont ask
A contest entry
- Hey Dude, Come Be Obscure! (4) by sock monkey.
525 points, ended May 22, 2007, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is pretty deep. I like it, it's abstract and the title fits well. Thanks for entering.
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