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Different Circumstances

Two best friends
One ages, one sheds skin
Never would they have been
Under different circumstances
Yet they stand the test of time
One grows older, year by year
The other left behind
Come together still friends
Both to fight for their friendship
Against the vampaneze.

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  • lunagirl15
    June 11, 2007
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    best book series ever! you make me love it even more! woot! i hope you win!


  • DesolatELifE
    May 22, 2007

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    I read this last ngiht but clearly forgot to comment.
    I really very like it!
    It's comforting 'cause it suggests that even if two people are very different, they can still be the best of buddies!


  • stevens5613
    May 21, 2007

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    Good poem hunni, beautiful and i must agree that the ending is absolutly amazing. Good luck in the contest though you may not need it.


  • travis34dietC
    May 21, 2007

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    nice
    i love the last three lines,
    "Come together still friends
    Both to fight for their friendship
    Against the vampaneze."
    great way to end the poem!
    thanks for entering and good luck!