Transcending sorrows begin,
I rub and rub and rub,
The tears have yet to disappear.
I fell so hard, so fast.
Incredulous hesitation abandoned,
Assumptions of the sincerity,
Barely able to breath.
In my blind dependence,
Love Sickness manifested,
Deep ravenous romantacism,
Heeding all and any sensibility.
I ran into your arms originally in hesitation,
My heart ripened from past calamity,
Is this love my minds creation?
If so, then it shouldn't be this hard to let go.
Uncloud My soul I pray,
Bring lumionous devotion,
I'm tormented by the pain.
Intoxicated by left over sentiment,
Trying any way I can,
Sexual enticement cannot persuade,
Your mind is made up you maintain.
No last kiss, No last goodbye,
Not one more embrace.
Only amours sweet taste,
Could keep me lingering.
Crying as I wait.
As I wait and wait and wait I....
Reach inside my broken heart,
Hoping to recapture my faith.
True Love do not abandon me.
Transform my heartache,
Day by day.
Dear True Love...
Come back I just have one thing to say,
I love you In deepest affection
Do not abandon me my amoure.
Please tell me what you think
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You spoke for me with /love sickness manifested/ and /is this love my minds creation/ and although it doesn't really help to know that this is the same for others, at least there is a certain solidarity in shared anguish.
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I am so moved...
and a bit frightened, as this sounds so like me.
"Is this love my minds creation?
If so, then it shouldn't be this hard to let go." speaks to me as so few can.
This is so touching, that it is now one of my favorite reads.
Thank you for your talent.
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This is a intense poem. Filled with lots of emotion. I love the way it is formatted. Great imagery. Thank you for sharing a piece of you with me. Blessed Be my friend! ~~Shannon~~
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Oh my...
this is so very beautiful....
I mirror these emotions...
I so truly do...
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Wow! I was blown away by this piece! Love, sadness, devotion and heartache! The rollercoaster of love, thrills and excitement, pain and disappointment! Some say you can't have one without the other...well fine!!! Just make sure there is more love than pain it we will call it even!
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thank you graciously
i find it so heartfelt and kind that you have taken the time to read this piece. It is one of my favorites. It is a rollercoaster and unfortunately it feels that the pain is never ending. However you were right in one aspect and I thank you for pointing it out. When I think about it. There was so much love and is so much love I shared with this human being. Yet when someone doesnt see the possibilities of loving me forever then there really is nothing but me standing alone.
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A wonderful write
Such a beautiful poem for the emotions that are attatched to it..I could list favorite lines but why..It is all great..It has a nice flow to it...It is easy to read but very heavy on the heart..you have once again brought your emotion into my mind and heart..very well written... Mark
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Excellent Poem
This is really good!Excellent job!I liked your poem Keep up with the loving words and pain!Very well written!Nicely done!Lisa K haslett Raytown missouri! -
Very heartfelt and tragic. You express emotions here with such depth. The pain and confusion after a breakup is such a terrible time. To bounce back and love yourself is what you must do.
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