The early morning light revives me from slumber
I rise and stroll by the river
It is a new day and expectation is in the air
My fledgling eagle wings are yearning to fly
Still tender they tentatively stretch
Testing their fresh strength
Unknown things are about to occur
When I take flight to circle the skies
Because I will fly higher than thought
Reaching for my dreams and causing them to be real
The transformation occurs as feathers and bone grow
Nothing can prevent me from fulfilling my wishes
There are no limits as my wings hold me above the below
In a list
A contest entry
- When Dreams Come True - A Title Contest by Girl With Guitar.
925 points, ended June 15, 2007, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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A wonderful feel in this poem. It is something I believe in
*** for this
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This is beautiful
and perfect un my mind, for the book. I would give it ***
HUGS -
This is a great poem. I can see the relation between the actual song and this piece and there's a strong sense of finding the freedom in both. Reading "Circling the skies" actually gives me the image of looking up and seeing an eagle soaring above around the ring of the sun, and I can even hear it's calls.
Excellent piece, thank you for the entry. And I shall re-read this before judging
Thank you for the note.
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A positive vision
This is so possible. We can fly and do whatever we want to do just by the power of thought and Faith.
A great Poem
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