face to face
noses touching
I can see your pupils dialating
you can't feign ignorance with me, sweetheart
your hands in mine,
warm, comforting
I want you to hold me
but I can't break this immaculate silence
with the weight of words
the stars above me
revolve around me
singing their enchanted hymns
reaching over the aeons to tell me just what to do with myself
"If I lay here
If I just lay here
Would you lie with me and
Just forget the world?"
nebulous thoughts for a misty night
your lustful words drift over my skin
make me feel so...
unfulfilled
thoughts race through vexatious contemplation
and I find that I'm no longer standing on solid ground
my paranoia disables me
I fear too much
just hold me close and tell me you'll never die
you've perforated my bubble of indifference with your charm and smile
and now I've got nothing left to hold on to
my world falls away
ears full of this lyrical interlude
you seduced me with your smile
telling me lies
I feel so...
unfulfilled
just talk to me
face to face
Author notes
"inflammible"
SN = pointlessdayz (you can make this contest not anonymous, you know)
I used option 2 (Face to Face), Option 3 (if I lay here, if I just lay here, would you lie with me, and just forget the world?), and option 4 (the word bank...)
do you want me to highlight the words from the word bank that I used?
also, I think that I may have possibly incorporated option 5 (theme love) but I dont know if that's what you wanted...
In a list
A contest entry
- Give Me Something Special by Cherry.Cyanide.
500 points, ended June 26, 2007, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
it's shit, shut up!
Comments
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I love it, very much. I really like love poems, they're always a joy to read. Yours was something special, I can't put my finger on why though...
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