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[ Time is ticking by, ]

Time is ticking by,
Sand falls down the hourglass,
The sapling grows old,
Just two more short years left now,
Before I wear cap and gown.

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A little piece that came to my mind in tanka about ending my sophmore year.

(Tanka is 5 lines of 5/7/5/7/7 syllables.

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  • midnight eyes
    July 7, 2007
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    short but wonderful


    Amber


  • Stars of Hope
    June 5, 2007
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    Great write! Class of 09 here! My favorite line was the third!


  • Another Sad Song
    May 28, 2007

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    i love it. i know what you're feeling. it's so weird to think we're graduating it just two years. it's like we're almost really adults now!! haha. i love it.


  • cLaSsiX
    May 22, 2007
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    hmmm. 09 right here. good read.

  • in-the-twilight
    May 21, 2007

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    Yeah... GO CLASS OF 2009! hehe! The third line caught me... didn't know how it fit in... but it was overall a great write! Rock on! xoxo Meg

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