Beacon
Stuggle for air
Tread water
The deep end
The foot
that keeps you under
Stuggle for breath
Become 100% water
Refuse death
Live forever
Push back
When hope is lost
Hope.
When fear is lost
Get back up
Break the surface
Tread water
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Don't care what you think.
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omg ive been gone for sooo long and now i c u havnt even written anything????
how am i supposed to lear anything if u dont teach man.. ITS INSANE
ps whats up brother. u miss me
i miss u and no its not the xmas alcohol talking hehehe
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Brilliamt!
Hey bro!! I dunno if you remember your old school bud!! I pray all is well with you man and I like this poem alot!
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keep your head up above water...
you ok?
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am i ok? i dont know what 'ok' is... i am trying to destroy all goodness... everywhere... for everyone... my fault? no... trying hard not to place blame...
my sister told me... women in their mid-20s are stupid... this is the thought that gives me hope... and hate and regret and guilt and ego and lust and greed... and sadness pushes me to become emotionless... i can't not care ever... -
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not all women in their 20s are stupid. I wish I knew how to help - is there anything I can do?
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you could find me one of those good smart women in their mid-twenties... lol... i guess time will heal... not much anything anybody could do to help...
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hummm So how u been Doug... been a while since ive been on here and by the looks of it same for you...
everything changes huh...
just like stupid 20Y old woman will change when they hit 30....
dont worry... thats the thing bout hope... it only works if you can hold on to it.. its never fast but when it comes it will taste so much sweeter....
And it will come to you my friend. Even the devil had his bad and good times..and ur a lot stronger then the devil
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