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Missing Piece

I had a map without a compass,
A lantern without oil.
You're the pice of my puzzle
I didn't know I'd lost.
I had a track without a train,
I was roofless in the rain.

You're my compass,
You're my oil.
You complete the picture.
You're my engine,
You're my shelter.
Without you I'd surely falter.

Author notes

I wrote this totally out of the blue without any kind of plan. I was hoping the spontaneousness would work with the poem.

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  • xXGoddessofPainXx
    May 21, 2007

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    Umm it is a good piece though.. But if may say its not very joint.. Maybe if u worked on it a bit more it would be a bit different.. Very disjoint..