The mad hatter
[lost all sense]
Come have some tea with me
And listen to me ramble
Alice in Wonderwhere?
[lost in my own mind]
Find the way from
here?there?yonder?
A new boy, so.so sweet
This might actually last
And im pull.pulling my hair out
My plans all screwed up
So different, in thought
In verse, in everything
Cant keep it straight
Cant keep it clean
.shit.
?Mommy dearest?
Are you still there
Do you still care?
i.dont.know
Sh! keep a secret
Mentality screwed up
Give advice;show hypocrisy
Whats the root of this
insecurity
Lost all control
On this little keyboard
So many letters,
Cant compile a solid piece
Am i making any sense
I cant really tell anymore
Lost all hope,
Guess im ((done))
Author notes
yeah yeah yeah...dont know what im doing everythings a little topsey/turvey
Not as good, same concept, what do you think?
Comments
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Interesting part 2
Quite an intriguing part 2 you have written her ebut then again it is quite well written like the first part. I am really enjoying how you penned these poems and well you are quite a good poet. very well done and worded quite interestingly keep up the good work
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"Lost all control
On this little keyboard
So many letters,
Cant compile a solid piece"
I like this one too. I really do like the randomness of it all. I'm guessing you're just writing about everything that's going on in your life all in one poem. If I interpreted it correctly, I really like that idea...it's different. If I didn't interpret it correctly, I still love the poem and you can just ignore me. lol. =]
keep writing!
-Jess
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I love the fact that you know me on a deeper level. cause all you know about me is my poetry, which is deeper than any level anyone can really know me. Iunno if im making sense, it makes sense to me, but im a little tipsey right now, even for a monday. You interpreted correctly, im just freewriting with form, because even though it doesnt come out normal, it comes out different, which is so me, you dont even know...
Your encouragement means so much to me, im glad you read all my shit, lol the next installment should come tonight anyway, even if ive been drinking, hope you like it.
Love&&Peace&&Smile,
B. Blair
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