I walked away
from your cold eyes
they were brimming with tears
that night you promised
swore, you’d love me forever
I guess forever meant breaking my heart
so please forgive me
for not turning back
at those cries that pierced my heart
you stood there gripping
your love clenched in your bloody fist
as my tears turned red as they flowed down my face
Author notes
I wrote this after i was raped
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this was a sad but great poem i have been raped to just 2 many to count though i have a 6 year old son by the man who raped and beat me when i was 12 years old i am now 18 years old and havent seen my son since he was to his dad said the only way i can see my son was to let him beat me up first.
again this was great but said keep up the great work and never let your pen stop flowing i am sorry that you where raped it is not a great feeling i no thanks for sharing and god bless you and keep you and love you forever and always sign dianna lee green also knowned as serenity lynn silvermoon
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it saddens and comforts me to know that I'm not alone. thank you for sharing your story with me.
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there is SOO much emotion in this. and being able to write this after, right after...i wasnt able to write anything for days after.
thank you for telling your story, i hope you've found the way to deal with this in the best way you can.
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first there was alot of drinking but then i got counseling. My friends also helped alot...it took awhile, but i decided i'd rather be a survivor than a victim.
& i hope you are finding your own way of coping -
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and i am...slowly, but i am.
i hope you've done the same.
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