Chemicals in the brain
Overlapping my mind
Serious contemplations
Laughter from another time
Clear amounts of gender
Complications abound
Damnation of a race
In a world where no one is found
Justice doesn’t matter
Honor is the only way
Bring it to the gates
Stepping out of the dark caves
Nothingness surrounds you
Bringing constants to your life
No way to move ahead
Unless you accept the light
Author notes
Dunno!!!!!!!!!!
In a list
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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this was an interesting write. keep up the great work.

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Another splendid work from the amazing twin sis of mine! This really packs a punch. I love you my sexy twin!
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The last stanza really stuck out to me. I believe it had the most powerful message and cleany finished up the poem and what the rest of the poem was saying.
I like how the ending was hopeful and it was a good piece of advice that you were giving the reader the option of following. You weren't forcing it, just suggesting it. I thought that was wonderful.
lots of love mummy dearest





