I lay awake,
Early in the morn
Wondering why
You left me so torn
With the knowledge that
There's nothing I can do,
Nothing I can say
To bring back you
So I close my eyes
And what is it I hear?
I hear you saying you love me
And I wish you were here
Author notes
Option 1. A poem about something or someone you love.
Option 1-Amazing Bands
Choose one of the following bands and either write about the band, or choose one of their songs and write about it. There will be a list of classic and modern bands.
Pink Floyd
"One look from you and I would fall from grace" -option 6
#5. Write me a poem about missing someone.
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amazing luv it lexie
luv cece -
this is short sweet and to the point. i really enjoyed it, thanks for the entry =)
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aww that is very sweet. thanks for entering and good luck in my contest.
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Oooh I really liked this! Short and simple, and that's the way to go! Basically ahmazing!
"I hear you saying you love me
and I wish you were here"
Awww great way to end this. Definitely liked this one ALOT.
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Very well written, short, sweet, and to the point. Love this song as well! Good job!
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I loved this poem. It was sweet and packed with emotion. Well, I am sure that you will find that person some day...but don't rush it. You're so young. Heck, I'm so young. Keep up the great work, for you have said so much with so few words here!
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Beautiful!
this is the first poem i clicked on off from your page and i absolutely loved it!
i sometimes hate rhyme and i sometimes love it
this is one of those 'love it'
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Very nice, short and expressive. Sad, but truthful, a good poem.
Kaitlyn
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simple and pretty but so sad--love it
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oh i like the part you did "Wondering why you left me torn" So many people have wondered that! You did a great job!
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Aw I love this. Simple, yet emotional, with great rhyme to boot! I don't see the rhyme as forced at all. That's silly. Thanks for sharing this with the group.
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I sense forced rhyme in your poem. "to bring back you" Thank you for entering my contest.
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ok, thanks... your welcome
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ok, the spaces don't count to the actual amount of lines a poem has, and this is less than 13 lines, so i must dq ur poem
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ok... sorry... could you tell me what you think about it?? is there any suggestions you could make to improve this poem?
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Cool
I like this write and love that song. I like the simple style and powerful message you have. Best of luck in the contest.
Take care.
Tali
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awww... very sweet lexie... you ara a good poet person even tho i make fun of you alot... lol,... the poem really does go with the title... wich is an awesomely awesome song by the way....love ya... tori.... boom teaky leaky snip snip--- mine and lexies insider --- lol
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lol thnx tori but its bone tiki liki snip snip lol
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AAAAAAWWWWW!!!!!!! I amlost cried at the end! This poem hit reeally close to home! And I mean that, I can litterally relate to it in a big way. I loved it. I thoughtit was very good and very well written. Wonderful job.
Megan
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