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Fairy Tales and Rainbows

I close my eyes to see your face
You hold me in my dreams
I hope that when I wake up
Everything is as good as it seems
I've kissed 10,000 frogs
But my fairy tale never came true
In fact I thought fairy tales were fake
Until I found you
All my life I've hopped rainbows
Searching for that pot of gold
I had yet to find it until
I looked where the wind blows
My fairy tale is finally complete
Hopefully followed by happy ever after
A life time full of love
And smiles filled with laughter
I close my eyes to see your face
You hold me in my dreams
I hope when I wake up
Everything is as good as it seems

Author notes

Umm... yeah, I like it but I don't. I've wrote better poems. A lot better poems, but because its about Dustin. I like it.

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Comments

  • Dante Covington
    May 27, 2007
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    Awww.... It's so sweet. I like it alot. I don't understand the metaphor about the wind though.


  • FallingTwilight
    May 20, 2007
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    I like it, I love the rhyming.

    Have a wonderful day,

    FallenPoeticAngel