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[♥] Secret Love Unaccepted [♥]

I'm not ashamed to say that I love you
Baby, you're my everything, yes it's true
Time spent with you, the love I find in your
eyes
Why must we keep this a secret?
Everytime they get suspicious, we feed them lies

But I want to tell them how I love you more
than the sun loves the moon
And how if they can't accept us, we'd just
as gladly run away, and do it really soon

When I sleep over, I can't hold you in my
arms when they're around
And when we make love, we have to be quiet
and cautious
And not make a sound

How can I do this? How can I lie about our
love when it's what fills me with existence
But I'd gladly put my pride away for you
So we won't be fought with their resistance

Looking into your eyes now
As you beg me please
Baby you fill my mind with your love for me
You spread and infect quicker than any disease

To intertwine my fingers with yours
To run my fingers through your hair
I want to show my love for you
I can't believe this, it just isn't fair

You're the only thing I want
I'm even more sure
As you breath " I love you"
into my ear
I'd die for you, to keep you safe
means to have no fear

Run away with me my love
Let's not keep this a secret
Let's tell them everything
Even if it means they can't accept

Look into my eyes and I'll tell you it's okay
Take my hand my love and let's just run away.

Author notes

this about the picture of the two girls kissing.

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  • The Hardest Goodbye
    May 21, 2007
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    very powerful. Loved it, =)


  • iamlost gold member
    May 20, 2007

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    Wow. This is amazing. The depth in this poem is just beautiful and so poignant. There isn't really much more I can say, this poem is just so full of emotion and depth. Wonderful.

    • Atrophya
      May 20, 2007
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      thank you, yes i really needed to get into the part to truly write what i would feel if put in this situation which i have been put in before.


  • AshliiAsphyxiation
    May 20, 2007
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    beautiful baby..

    such beauty in your words


    • Atrophya
      May 20, 2007
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      kind of reminds me of you and me. lol. i love you.

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