Heavenly bliss that is where i'm at
my one true love finally let me in
I share her amazing heart now and forever
she's my world, my ectasy
she makes me complete, she knows i'll always be there
my babi girlfriend and future wife
thank you for coming into my life
my beautiful princess i love you now and always
A contest entry
- Show Me The Love by Dark Whispers.
455 points, ended May 26, 2007, 24 entries
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you have this way with words, u know how to express them to your advantage! good!
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thankyou once again destiny for taken the time to read my work i apreciate it how are you getten on with your dilemma if you need to talk or any advice dont bf ashamed i would be honoured to help in any way i can love scullion xxx
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tyhis poem is very nice, but proper grammer and punctuation would have been nice. thanks for entering in my contest
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forever and always baby im yours completely, i welcome the rest of my life with you, if i were blind i know you would guide me, deaf i know you would listen for me, tired, i know you would be there to carrme in your arms. i am truely touched, my perfect angel and boyfriend xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
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thankyou babi i love u ur amazen xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
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