jagged and heavy breathing
sweat dropping everywhere
our bodies entwined
handling each other with care
we don’t know how it started
but our clothes lay over by the door
don’t care who sees or knows
because this pleasure shakes us from the core
your kisses line my body
your mouth has wondered everywhere
making me quake for more
making me want things I’d never dare
you slowly start to moan
as my tongue grazes your breast
teasing your hard nipple
waiting until I taste the rest
kisses down your navel
all the way to your peach
I smile when I see the hunger in your eyes
Your climax just out of reach
I start lightly lick the center of your body
Tasting the salty, wet, skin
You slowly moan
As I start to take you in
You rock your hips
As my tongue moves faster
Your body shakes
And your climax I can start to master
Never do I stop
I just take you all in
Hearing you scream
As I taste you in sin
I crawl up your body
You just lay there smiling
I kiss your precious mouth
And to my breast your hand is gliding
You taunt my nipple
I deepen my kiss
Your hand traces down my stomach
And I fall into an erotic bliss
You roll me over on my back
I softly cry out
when you touch my shaven core
I only want to shout
Your fingers move quickly
As I just kiss you more
Until my body shakes
And I empty from the core
You on top of me
Breathing in my ear
Our bodies heave together
Because we have tasted nothing so dear
Author notes
tell me what yall think!!!
A contest entry
- Random Choice Contest by Tconi.
302 points, ended June 2, 2007, 21 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I agree with MeaninggulPoet482. This is one of the first sex related poems I've read that doesn't take you into some tasteless and childlike place. You actually make it sound realistic and the detail is well said. Great peice!
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Wow finally a poem about sex that doesn't sound cheesy and just takes you in.
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what an attractive, enticing peice! i mean once i began to read, i found myself at the end! damn i want more. and btw, it's soo likely realistic and i think that's fantastic.
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all that salt n nothin to pepper those asses with
reckon yall need some seasoning lol
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awesome
u found a great balance in that it is so explicit, yet not over the top. the last stanza is a great way to finish off, the last line is especially good. loved reading it. keep up the good work -
nice who are you and could you explain these two characters i think i understand what they are but i want to be sure(ae they lesbians)
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very good
i like this one b/c it just gives the reader a little picture and the rest is for the imagination..good job
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