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Diabolical Decadence

Open to insects, ticks and leeches which feed on my sliver
Stitch the eyes shut with scars of painful thorns of life
Fragile permanence feeding on my bleeding hands
Come to the forest and dance away the neglect and blame
False perceptions phase to regain such a memory again

Desperation stole my voice that inhibits a forbidden passion
Embrace the withering reflection that breeds intertwined decay
Converged, subdued hostility forced upon a painful smile
Calloused, bruised infatuations relapse regrets at my weakened heart
Shedding skin to form a new evil which rages through pain

Silent eclipses consequence a swindling disposition
Despairing humble societies watch the seasons foil
Watching the hand tremble at the sight of condoned mercy
Manifest contraptions to justify porous enslaving intoxications
Waking to the rays beat down upon my quivering remorse

Tension caused by nightmares from the charismatic guilt
Paralyzing atonements righteousness shall burn internally
Ignorant signs turn my body albino with crimson structures
Remove the rain from underneath my lethargic umbrella
Lead forward to step out from the tearful sins to the stars

Author notes

It did not happen to me personally, but it happened to a close friend of mine, but I find this a very poem on many levels, hope you enjoy it.

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  • Sonofdead
    May 20, 2007

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    AMAZING!

    This was so deep i had to read it three times to make sure that i understood it all. it doesnt help that i am a stupid squid either. but this amazed me on so many levels.